did it look to plain without the yellow bckground scriblles?
they distract me

lose the yellow outline scribbles, especially on the raven/crow and it will be much better :)

I agree with lambie83, the yellow outline for the birds makes it look choppy. I don't like the pink backround for the shirt, but the olive greenish one looks just fine. I would also touch up the leaves alittle cause they just look unfinished. If these chnages were made I would buy and give it a 5.

I forgot to mention the "eye" on the bird to the lower left. It looks weird, like its just some random spot that shouldn't be there.

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i like it just the way it is, but how many colors are in this?? just wondering

4 colors - cream, green, orange and brown

Serenity now!

well the birds are red so itsnt that 5 colors?

Good placement.

Nope moonsekisser the birds are the same orange as the leaves, it might look a little bit different becuase of the gif file that sometimes mass up colors.
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Nice. I really like the mix of colors.

very cool but tree/branch may look better coming from near the bottom of the side seam

it could also do without the crow... though I realize there's probably a message in its being there..
... maybe you could move it to one of the upper corners on the back of the shirt???

You need to lose the yellow slotches and redraw the samller bird's eye. The black bird also looks a little too hunched over.

i like it but it looks like it has too many different colors. id buy it if it got printed though.

this is amazing and i want one. I like the idea of putting the crow on the back shoulder.

i think the yellow should be red for like... impending doom :]

enlarge the bird in the upper right, and i would buy this for sure, i like the style of this, nice work

refreshingly different.

i think this shirt is definately something id wear... good job champ

take off the weird yellow scribbley things, enlarge the bird off by itself, and i love you. thanks. 4

i like it a lottttt.

really creepy and cool. i like it!

i like it, I would buy it 5.

5
buy.

leave off the upper corner crow and i will like it

I love it on pink.

Really like it. Would be a little git to print. Will need 2 prints on the same shirt if it is to come in more than 1 size.

I don't really like the pink one, but I love the shirt design

One of the greatest I have seen, reminds me of a song I can not remember :)5$

Really like the placement and all the colors used.
I actually really like the yellow scribbles they make the design stand out more and give it more of an artistic view.
Id leave it how it is. Ecspecially on the brown shirt it looks pretty awesome.

It's wonderful.
The multiple colours of the leaves look very interesting, and the colours behind the birds are great.
$5

5

finally stuff i like might be back on threadless

What a beautiful piece!

nevermore

love it. I'd buy. It's a 5!

fantastic
ill buy it
big 5

Thanks for the comments, you're making me jump all around the house (not on the street, what am I Crazy ?)

Not to bring something up that may have already been settled, but aren't there at least 5 colours here?
1. Cream/Yellow - outline scribbles
2. Orange - Bird and in leaves
3. Green - leaves
4. Brown - raven
5. Gray - in the details of the raven

perhaps he gray is meant to be the background colour but I'm not sure if that would work very well on the pink then.
also, again it may just be the gif and/or my screen, but it looks like more than one brown especially where i can see a difference between the birds foot colour and the branch that it is on.

I like the idea quite a bit though. Just not sure about the details their. Still gonna vote high though, and hope that those can be fixed before printing.

Hello again, well 4 colours it is, There is only one brown
colour and the raven details is the backround (in this case gray) best regards, Asaf

BIRDS ON A SHIRT

Coming this summer...

I love it. 5

I want this one.