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I like the idea, but I think it could be made to look a little clearer, like if the astronaut wasnt facing completely the other way and if there was some contrast between the moon and the sky
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I agree about the way the astronaut is facing. And maybe straighten out the lines for the empty swing...
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the moon craters look like amoebas or something. also, why is there a shadow of the swing frame, but not a shadow of the astronaut?
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i keep thinking that the guy going over the swing set is a polar bear because of the way the helmet looks.
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You said that the empty swing is floating becuase there's no gravity, which makes sense, but I still think it would look better it the ropes or chains or whatever were straight. Good idea.
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If you could make the astronaut clearer as mentioned earlier, and put a little more detail in the craters, this is a great design and a really clever concept...keep at it.
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I like the concept. I always wanted to do it as a kid. I think it would look better if it was set in a park, with a normal kid on the swing...
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i like the idea but it took me awhile to realize that those were moon craters, and not jellyfish. It sure is cute tho!
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shazam i'm back there doing the count down too!
as mentioned above bigger, and brighter? earth but keep the astronaut other than that it works a treat £5. |
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good concept...
badly executed. would have liked the illustration to be realistic instead of cartoony. it would have improved the surreal-ness of the timeless "swinging the whole way around" dream. |